Sylvia Wynter's Dream

Opening Line

Task: Write an opening sentence that pulls the reader and makes them want to read more.

Even if you don’t consider yourself to be a liar, the biggest one of all time remains hidden inside of your head.

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2 responses to “Opening Line”

  1. jessiemayers Avatar
    jessiemayers

    I’m intrigued!

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  2. blaire_santos Avatar
    blaire_santos

    Interesting! Can be more concise. Here are a few suggestions:
    1. Even if you don’t consider yourself a liar, the biggest liar of all time hides in your head.
    2. It’s time to face the truth: You are the biggest liar ever.
    3. Whether you consider yourself a liar or not, the greatest liar hides inside your mind.

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