Sylvia Wynter's Dream

opening sentence.

By Javeir H.

Amidst the chaos, a powerful hand grasped my arm in the darkness, as I swiftly opened my eyes in utter disbelief.

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    jessiemayers

    The sentence could be more gripping if there were fewer descriptions. “Amidst the chaos” is a good start, I think.

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