Sylvia Wynter's Dream

OPENING LINE PROMPT

“In the fortress of mind, dementia is an unwanted guest.”

REVISIONS:

Narrative Essay #1 “Tori carried the weight of a burden that not even Jamaica’s warm breeze could lift.”

Narrative Essay #2 “In the vibrant streets of Manchester, Jamaica, lived a remarkable man named Harold Murray.”

Narrative Essay #3 “Doris sat in her favorite pew at a small church in Orlando, Florida.”

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    Jamilla Morgan

    Interesting. I’d actually suggest you compare dementia to something that fits better with the idea of the fortress. I’d have to give it more thought but my first thought is of an enemy that has slipped through the cracks in the security.

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